DIRECTIONS: Locate the most recent draft of a report or essay you’ve written recently. Copy
and paste a paragraph from that paper into the space below. Then revise the paragraph,
changing the structure of some of the sentences to make the passage more interesting and
easier to follow. Look back through this lesson to review ways to vary sentence structure.

Original Paragraph 1:

Revised Paragraph 1:
Now copy and paste another paragraph, and add sentence variety to that paragraph also.

Original Paragraph 2:

Adding Variety
Revised Paragraph 2:

"With clarity, introduce the topic in a manner that follows logically from the task and purpose you have been given. It must be clear that you have a good command of the topic."

What is the revised paragraph 1?

"When writing, it is key to write with clarity. This can be done by introducing the topic in a manner that follows logically from the task and purpose you have been given. Clearly, you have a good command of the topic."

What is the Original Paragraph 2?

In the body of your essay (which should follow after your introduction) you must demonstrate adequate provision of related and relevant evidence to buttress your points. Spend one paragraph on each point and always start with the key point for each paragraph.

What is the revised paragraph 2?

While writing the body of your essay, you should demonstrate adequate provision of related and relevant evidence to buttress your points. It is to be noted that the body of the essay comes after the introduction.

It is advisable to spend one paragraph on each point and always start with the key point for each paragraph.

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